SlashBolt1's Reviews

[Super Mario Bros. Z (Episode 1)]

Although I never saw the originals, this is amazing. Just keep doing what your doing. And just don't forget: "A la peanut butter sandwiches!"

[HOW TO GET THE PUSSY IN FIVE EASY STEPS]

Better than what I expected it to be... and do the steps really have anything in common? Just wondering, cuz I dont think so.

TheJanitor9k responds:

Not really, we all just made our cartoons in less than 24 hours so it was just a tossup on what the other people were doing.

[[Electro] Detention (feat. Steklo)]

Basic over view of this piece:
Vocals: Great
Music Itself: Decent, definitely catchy in come spots.
Intro: Way too quiet, quite bland as well
Build Up: Lacks something, can't tell what specifically
Chorus: Same as Build Up
Vocals + Music: Not trying to be mean, but the only spot where it fits even remotely is the chorus. Even then, the vocals are slightly off-beat. Just the way that the entire piece is structured with the vocals doesn't sound right at all, most notably the Build-up, but also the verses. Do work on that, as I find that this piece could have has so much more.

- SlashDaUmbreon (Shadowscape)
Founder of RisingDawn Sounds

[[Dubstep] Are You Listening (feat. WithoutMyArmor)]

Amazing Vocal work and tuning, that's what I'm most impressed about. ^-^ Only reasons why this is a 4/5 are the mastering and drops.
Mastering on the track is a little wonky. Drop at times is a little loud, and vocals are sometimes drowned out.
The drop itself is very bland for melodic dubstep. It needed something under it, like some sort chords and a bassline.
Otherwise, amazing piece. ^-^

[Origin]

Well worth listening to! Atmosphere for the song is well done and encompasses the name and feeling well. It has a good transition from a calm song into a dance beat that flows naturally. Nothing I can really say about mixing aside from slight tweaks to the bassline. Only other things I'd change is the repetitive nature of the vocal clip and the ending. Though a well-made clip, a little variation would have helped the piece out. Still nice anyway. And just for personal taste, the ending is a bit abrupt. Maybe a short cooldown transition into the ending would have been better. Keep up the great work! ^-^
- SlahDaUmbreon (Shadowscape)
Founder of RisingDawnSounds